Wednesday, July 31, 2013

A Personal Essay by a Personal Essay

The shortest, yet possibly most intriguing of the essays in The Best American Essays is A Personal Essay by a Personal Essay. Written by Christy Vannoy, this essay takes place during the duration of a clinic led by “the Article’s Director and Editor for a national women’s magazine,” but it never reveals where or for what magazine specifically.
The only real evidence that Vannoy is credible is that this essay is from McSweeney’s, a well-known American publishing house. However, credibility is not of much issue because this is a creative work with no information needed. In fact, it is all a narrative from the point of view of a personal essay. During the story, this essay is in this writer’s clinic in which personal essays are read and critiqued. Throughout the story, the personal essay is sizing up the other essays and contemplating what makes a good personal essay.
Vannoy’s purpose in writing this was to highlight the fact that struggle makes good writing. Vannoy targets the aspiring writer to get her point across that difficulty or rough times in one’s life can make great stories.
Vannoy is able to prove her point through humor. The internal monologue of the essay about other essays is both funny and relatable. The essay thinks: “Every essay who’s been through chemo or tried lesbianism ends up bald. Bald isn’t the story. Alopecia was heading in the right direction, loving herself, but she was getting there all wrong” (Vannoy 210). Although this humor may be cold and cutting, Vannoy is able to portray the faults in certain essays and how the essays could be better.

Besides using humor to prove that struggle trumps bland personal essays that lack hardship, Vannoy uses the point of view as a unique rhetorical device. Although this essay is short, the use of an inanimate object personified throughout the whole essay is intriguing. Without this device, this essay about essays would be exactly what it’s telling the reader not to be when writing: dull. Therefore, the point of view proves a point within a point: spice up your writing.

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